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26 October 2010

Writing - 5W Poems

We wrote 5 W poems last week.
A 5 W poem has 5 lines which answer 5 of our question words crating a poem. It helps us to record lots of details.

Line 1 = Who
Line 2 = What
Line 3 = When
Line 4 = Where
Line 5 = Why

Here are some examples:

The ducks
Floated down the rapids
In a big lake
In summer
Because they were hot.
By Ollie

The giraffes
Munch on a juicy sweet leaf
In the morning for breakfast
At the amazing zoo
Because they were hungry.
By Shaynae

Miss Brown
Got told off
Yesterday
In Mr Baldwin's office
For giving us homework.
By Taine

The dog
Bit me
On Friday
At Home
Because I was annoying him.
By Ellie-Rose

22 April 2010

Holiday Recounts

In the fantastic holiday we went for a 3 hour drive. We stayed for 5 fantastic Easter nights and we went fishing. We got 5 sharks and 1 cod and a sting ray.
By Shaynae.

Wow! This aqua taxi goes really fast it must be going about one hundred knots. It must have a powerful engine. It feels like we are going as fast as a rocket. When we got off we walked to large Torrent Bay. On the way back we had to take three aqua taxis back to Kaiteriteri. When we hopped on the third boat we had to be careful because both boats were out at the sparkly sea.
By Matthew