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Showing posts with label Ellie-Rose. Show all posts
14 November 2010
26 October 2010
Writing - 5W Poems
We wrote 5 W poems last week.
A 5 W poem has 5 lines which answer 5 of our question words crating a poem. It helps us to record lots of details.
Line 1 = Who
Line 2 = What
Line 3 = When
Line 4 = Where
Line 5 = Why
Here are some examples:
The ducks
Floated down the rapids
In a big lake
In summer
Because they were hot.
By Ollie
The giraffes
Munch on a juicy sweet leaf
In the morning for breakfast
At the amazing zoo
Because they were hungry.
By Shaynae
Miss Brown
Got told off
Yesterday
In Mr Baldwin's office
For giving us homework.
By Taine
The dog
Bit me
On Friday
At Home
Because I was annoying him.
By Ellie-Rose
A 5 W poem has 5 lines which answer 5 of our question words crating a poem. It helps us to record lots of details.
Line 1 = Who
Line 2 = What
Line 3 = When
Line 4 = Where
Line 5 = Why
Here are some examples:
The ducks
Floated down the rapids
In a big lake
In summer
Because they were hot.
By Ollie
The giraffes
Munch on a juicy sweet leaf
In the morning for breakfast
At the amazing zoo
Because they were hungry.
By Shaynae
Miss Brown
Got told off
Yesterday
In Mr Baldwin's office
For giving us homework.
By Taine
The dog
Bit me
On Friday
At Home
Because I was annoying him.
By Ellie-Rose
Labels:
Ellie-Rose,
Ollie,
Shaynae,
Taine
28 April 2010
Descriptive Writing
The Giraffe
This giraffe has a long tongue. They have beady eyes. Giraffes are spotty like chicken pox. Their horns are big and fat. The tail is long and skinny and fluffy.
- Paris
The Elephant
The elephant has big floppy ears. He's grey like the concrete. He has super sharp tusks. He has crinkly skin like Grandma and Grandad's.
- Jamie
The Pig
The pig is as pink as a marshmallow. It has got a big nose. It is massive.
- Ellie-Rose
This giraffe has a long tongue. They have beady eyes. Giraffes are spotty like chicken pox. Their horns are big and fat. The tail is long and skinny and fluffy.
- Paris
The Elephant
The elephant has big floppy ears. He's grey like the concrete. He has super sharp tusks. He has crinkly skin like Grandma and Grandad's.
- Jamie
The Pig
The pig is as pink as a marshmallow. It has got a big nose. It is massive.
- Ellie-Rose
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