28 April 2010

Descriptive Writing

The Giraffe
This giraffe has a long tongue. They have beady eyes. Giraffes are spotty like chicken pox. Their horns are big and fat. The tail is long and skinny and fluffy.
- Paris

The Elephant
The elephant has big floppy ears. He's grey like the concrete. He has super sharp tusks. He has crinkly skin like Grandma and Grandad's.
- Jamie

The Pig
The pig is as pink as a marshmallow. It has got a big nose. It is massive.
- Ellie-Rose

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